Our word choice is how we build a relationship
Do you call it a pub? Or is it a bar?
The words that we choose make a difference — they give us insight into personality, including where someone is from, their education levels, and their outlook on life.
Our vocabulary is accessible, but we use mid-length words to come off as more professional. We want to come off as knowledgeable and sophisticated, but still clear. Our audience is likely busy business pros, so we want to keep things direct and to the point.
For example a welcome that began with:
- "Greetings and salutations. We are pleased to see that you have downloaded a report from our website. Our hope is that you enjoy it. ...is too formal and forced. “Greetings and salutations” is convoluted, and the sentence structure is bizarre.
- “*Hey soul shine! Thanks for finding us on this crazy blue marble we call Earth and sharing a piece of your radiance with us! We can’t wait to see you shine brighter and we ♥️ you!”...would be much too casual and familiar for our brand.
- “Hi, Eric. Thanks for downloading our report. We hope you enjoy it.”...would strike the balance between straightforward and easy to understand, but would still maintain a bit of professional distance.
Choose vocabulary that is…
Understandable
‍Throw your ten-dollar words out the window. Our primary goal is to make ourselves understandable.
Precise
We’re talking to busy business professionals. Assume they know what they’re doing, and that they can smell bullshit from miles away.
Choose words with positive connotations
Every word can have a positive or a negative spin to it, depending on the frame. For ShareWillow, choose words that affirm, rather than words that shame.
Keep an eye out for words that sound upbeat and happy. We’re fans of soft semivowels like F, H, J, L, M, N, R S, V, and W because they feel open and inviting.
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Feel free to use marketing jargon
We assume that we’re talking to marketers and founders who know what acronyms like PMF, PMM, and GTM mean, so we’re not afraid to use “jargon” language.